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Jump..........

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1Jump.......... Empty Jump.......... Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:11 pm

Admin

Admin
Admin

I'm gonna fall
I'm at the edge of this cliff
All I can do now is jump
What is there left for me to do?
Besides you

Running toward the edge
My only other choice
Either that or stay in this wasteland
This toxic dump
Where nothing can exist
But hopelessness and sadness
I either jump or here I get stuck

I'm yelling for someone to catch me
Underneath the ground which I jump
But who would care enough
To come around and help me
No
My life's not worth that much

So, I wrote that yesterday during free period. What do you think? Should I finish it?

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2Jump.......... Empty Re: Jump.......... Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:58 pm

MichaelJackson'sGirl

MichaelJackson'sGirl

Hmm, with a few music choices and chorus alterations, I can make this into a song in no time flat.

3Jump.......... Empty Re: Jump.......... Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:41 pm

Admin

Admin
Admin

Yeah, I'm planning to do so...

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4Jump.......... Empty Re: Jump.......... Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:59 am

MichaelJackson'sGirl

MichaelJackson'sGirl

Can't wait to see that.

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