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1Sorry......... Empty Sorry......... Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:52 pm

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Sorry

All I want is to be and friend,
But you don't see it,
I will try to relate,
But I may not be it

Chorus
I'm gonna fight against myself,
So we can be friends now,
I know you act like you don't mind,
But deep down you really care

I'm gonna be a better friend,
So you can be happy,
I'm gonna try to understand,
What you are going through

I care about you because,
You're such a friend and I'm not,
You offer better advice,
Than anyone I know

Chorus

Bridge
You know the right thing to do,
I always listen to you,
You make me glad but also blue,
Don't know where I'd be without you

Chorus

I am really going to try.
To be a better friend and,
I feel so bad and you know,
I am so sorry______________

Inspiration: A friend who I was such jerk to and I really feel bad. I sort of wrote this song as an apology

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2Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:25 pm

shadowsowner888

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I remember this! When I read it on WI, it really hit home. Razz I feel like a jerk to one of my friends because she just told me that she felt kinda ignored when I was spending all my time with this other girl at band. xP It's an awesome song, anyway. Smile

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3Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:36 am

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Thanks! Smile
Yes, my friend has forgiven me but I still feel like I was being a jerk and I felt awful about it.

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4Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:54 am

shadowsowner888

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That's good. Smile

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5Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:52 am

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I wrote another song but I am still working on music and editing.

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6Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:10 am

shadowsowner888

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Ah, okay. Smile Well, I'll be looking forward to seeing it! I actually have a new song, too, but I'm not even done with the chorus. xD I just love singing it, cus this is for once a song that I like the tune of.

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7Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:27 pm

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Me too! I like my new song. It is based off a personal experience but not mine. It's based off my cousin's experience.

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8Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:27 am

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

Ah. Very Happy Cool.

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9Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:49 pm

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Oh shoot! I was on here and then forum-motion randomely changed the background to a Michael Jackson background and I love MJ but I didn't think that would be the right background for here and so I e-nailed forum-motion and they said to just change it back but I couldn't find the right one. I will look.

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10Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:45 am

shadowsowner888

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Oo. o.0 That's not good. It looks like you fixed it, though!

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11Sorry......... Empty Re: Sorry......... Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:49 pm

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Nope. I can't find the right background. I will keep looking.

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