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Rain . . .

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1Rain . . . Empty Rain . . . Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:30 pm

shadowsowner888

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This is in writing, but yeah. xD And part was definitely suicidal (a part not based on me), so um, I'm editing that part out.

So fed up, I insist.
Staring longingly -edit!-at the sky-end of edit-.
In my heart, a constant distress,
But never brave enough to end the pain.

Then you come in, and my eyes mist.
I turn away, hoping for ends to the lies.
You get irked if I’m even stressed,
And I get so much blame . . .

And, it rains.

Tears fall; they make things worse.
You shout at me for my damp eyes.
I stay silent, looking down;
I take it all in silence.

I wish for, the end of the hurt.
Please, dear Jesus, take me up to the skies.
I don’t want her ever to be around;
Send her away, on the other side of a fence . . .

But it still rains.

CHORUS
Storming outside in the middle of the night,
The clouds are sobbing, but I cry harder.
Why is that with you there’s never any light?
In your presence, the sun grows darker.

You always manage to make us both fight;
Always insisting that you are the smarter.
Oh please, bring a prince to help with my plight,
Someone to make the hurt better . . .

But it rains, and rains.
Oh, it just rains . . .
It rains, and rains . . .
Baby, it still rains!
(End chorus)

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2Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:31 am

Admin

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I really like your song shadow! It's awesome! Yet, sad.

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3Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:46 pm

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

Thanks. Yeah . . . I was in an emo mood when I started writing this. xD

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4Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:42 pm

Admin

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That happens a lot when upset about something.

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5Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:39 am

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

Yeah, same here. xP

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6Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:50 pm

Admin

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I wrote a new song which I will post.

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7Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Tue Nov 24, 2009 7:12 am

crazzycat



very romantic Razz
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...With love to free glitter graphics...

8Rain . . . Empty Re: Rain . . . Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:55 pm

Admin

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Yes it is!

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