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The Only One

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1The Only One Empty The Only One Sun May 31, 2009 9:14 am

shadowsowner888

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The Only One

Intro
Can’t you see?
You’re the only one for me.
I don’t want anyone else,
No not one, except for you.

Can’t you see?
Soon the chance will be gone,
Hurry. Before I’m gone, gone . . .
Please, please, please, come to me.
[End intro]

Tell me, boy, what can I do?
To make you see-ee . . . me?
You never look my way;
Your gaze goes right through,
And I watch with jealousy as the other one smiles.



Last edited by shadowsowner888 on Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:32 pm; edited 1 time in total

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2The Only One Empty Awesome! Sun May 31, 2009 10:29 am

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That's a sweet song!

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3The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Sun May 31, 2009 3:14 pm

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

Thanks! =3 I think I came up with some lyrics for the chorus earlier - something along the lines of "please choose me" or something, like going along with the last line of the intro, but worded better than just "please choose me". XD I'll have to add it on later!

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4The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Sun May 31, 2009 8:23 pm

Chihuahua

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That's a really good song! Smile

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5The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Sun May 31, 2009 8:38 pm

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Yeah! All your songs speak for a lot of people. I think you would become a very successful singer because all your songs are meaningful shadow!

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6The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:40 am

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

Thanks guys! sunny I didn't think I wanted to be a singer, but now I feel like I have a chance of being a musician - my friend and I started a band, and so now that I'm figuring out how to play the guitar again, I'm really getting back into the music! XD

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7The Only One Empty coolio Mon Jun 01, 2009 11:06 am

muzicfreak


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Awesome song!!! I like it, and you should keep working on it to see if you can get a whole song out of it

8The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:43 pm

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Hey muzic!

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9The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:55 pm

shadowsowner888

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Thanks, Muzic! ^^ Yeah, I hope I can get a whole song out of it; I just need to take the time to write once in a while. XD

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10The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:33 pm

shadowsowner888

shadowsowner888

I added a bit! Smile

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11The Only One Empty Re: The Only One Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:35 am

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Ok, I'll see it!

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